hello! i am glad to show you the comic i am currently drawing.
there is no text defined for the moment, it will be a surprise, coming with colors.
all suggestions or opinions are welcome.
thanks for watching and enjoy!


page 1

pages 2 & 3

pages 4 & 5

pages 6 & 7

pages 8 & 9

pages 10 & 11

pages 12 & 13

kaya & olga in real colors.

see you later for updates.

link to dailymotion video:
http://www.dailymotion.com/video/xd5sfk_kaya-now-technique-de-dessin_creation

WOW, you really drew all this? Pretty good work

yes. thanks. if you have ideas for the text, i am open to all propositions.
i still have some ideas about what should be said, but i don't find how to say it.

[edit] i add pictures in all my post of this topic, in order to decorate the topic, and show more of my passion.

this one is a reproduction on A4 from a card.

here is the original

if you compare, you'll see many differences or errors.

You are really talented, edfed. Bravo!

Excellent drawings edfed, man you are talended, keep it up!

yeah, nice drawing

I'm stunned by your drawings! They're simply magnificent! And they remind me of this movie trailer: 9.

One little request: I want more naked scenes!

cool drawing,
here is what i could interpret

page 1
a girl woke up, then her servant tidy her up, feed her with some nice food, perhaps drugs.

page 2
she walks out from her cave, saw her great grandpa (who is a crazy scientist) who just DIY a crazy sun clock, he asks her to try some nice stuff, LSD that would let her enter the matrix or getting out. perhaps.

page 3
she lays down and prepare to enter the matrix. her great grandpa cooks some weird stuff to help her

page 4
she came into a weird scene, coz she saw a big "?" there.
she said, fuck, what is the hell all this, where am i

page 5
she saw her great grandpa, oh, fuck, this is not LSD, she been minimized into taskbar she is like a tiny creature in a weird space.

page 6
she travels around and flies... maybe she forgot to press the START button, so a robotic bill gates virus comes after her now, with a weird tool, something they call it an "axe", it crafted with small font "sleepsleep" there.

page 7
the girl runs, oh no, she flies

page 8
action still, oh hu ha ha hu hu..

page 9
she runs back to her great grandpa face and tell him the evil robotic bill keep on chasing her. grandpa eyes raze with fire, she said she wanna return to reality(?) now. then suddenly she woke up. (with clothes)
lol yong

amazing!

You have very interesting style, edfed.

Personally I prefer first few sheets when you were drawing with pencil (if I see it correctly), because these pictures seem to be "softer" than others.

Excellent feel of human body proportions and perspective. Perfect line.

Keep it up, edfed.

thanks everybody.
your encouragements goes directlly into the motivation part of my spirit

lets say just:

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Personally I prefer first few sheets when you were drawing with pencil (if I see it correctly), because these pictures seem to be "softer" than others.

it is always the same technique (chinese ink & pen over a pencil rough layout), the 4 first pages are just taken with a poor cam, and the last are taken with a scanner in black and white.

i have the project to add grey shades with pencil, and maybe colors with all techniques i know.

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One little request: I want more naked scenes!

yep! there will be other naked scenes. be patient.

up this week end!

[edit] to show picture again.
this is a research for characters.

the name of this char is denoc, from condé (french argot for cop).

this one is for the "floatting dwarf" research.

edfed wrote:

it is always the same technique (chinese ink & pen over a pencil rough layout), the 4 first pages are just taken with a poor cam, and the last are taken with a scanner in black and white.

OK, I understand it now.

Interesting, did you you try to find any publisher for it? I think your comic strip (if it would be complete, of course) deserves to be presented to the wider public. Maybe in the "standard" printed version or as an on-line version only.

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it is always the same technique (chinese ink & pen over a pencil rough layout), the 4 first pages are just taken with a poor cam, and the last are taken with a scanner in black and white.

You should apply some blur to get this effect (just not as much as in first pictures), IMO it looks nicer with it.

updates of the pages.


see the first post

bravo, bravo!!!

Wow, those are amazing! I wish I could draw just half as good as you.

Wow! Your comics are getting better and better! We now have coloured strips! You're amazing!

BTW, I updated my little request: I now want more naked scenes in true colours!

are you alien edfed??? or their friend, you are drawing lot of them

edfed wrote:

updates of the pages. see the first post

Very good work, edfed. I'm glad I can see your next drawings! Picture presented above reminds me somehow (in its general style) some graphics by German artist, pioneer of Surrealism, Max Ernst, who I like very much. Here you have an interesting example, one of his best known art-works (L'Ange du Foyer ou le Triomphe du Surréalisme, 1937):

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Picture presented above reminds me somehow (in its general style) some graphics by German artist, pioneer of Surrealism, Max Ernst, who I like very much. Here you have an interesting example, one of his best known art-works (L'Ange du Foyer ou le Triomphe du Surréalisme, 1937):

Marx Ernst picture remember me a cloud.
and the title confirm it, it is a cloud from a chimney. (chimney's angel)


i made the alien above this summer, it was a cold night, impossible to sleep, i ride all the night, halt in a highway station, and drink coffee until sunrise. the big grey sun and the moon are in the mind of the monster that waits for the sun.


the draw below is:

floatting borg.